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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-18 11:42 PM


You drive down the road
You hit bump after bump
Trying to avoid on pot hole
Just to find another

Then as you enter
The shopping center
You hit a speed bump
It felt more like a mountain

You find a sink hole
And your car falls in
And becomes like a mole
But at least there aren't bumps anymore

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
1 posted 2002-07-18 11:52 PM


Yes but I'd take the sink hole to be a bump..just upside down...just as disconcerting, like your imagination here


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