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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2002-07-18 12:09 PM



Wringing Out My Wranx


I stood upon the shores
Of the ocean we call Panx
In my hands I held my cape
As I was wringing out my Wranx

My Wranx is a sacred thread
Woven by my mother’s mother
Each color plaited delicately
Each Wranx unlike any other

The moons of Panx glistened
In the auburn sky of Moor
But I knew on the morrow
I would see you on this shore

Pacing through the Panxian night
I await the shine of ship’s bow
Knowing that my lover returns
To seal my fate in vow.


*

Note: there should be NO egg on your face sir!    

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (07-18-2002 12:10 AM).]

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wranx
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1 posted 2002-07-18 12:13 PM


Egads, Poet Ma'am

I'm feelin' kissin' fresh!

~wranx

I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on.     E.F.Rose

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2002-07-18 12:16 PM


LOL!!! I'm glad you liked it. I wouldn't want you to feel badly that you thought I was a MAN! LOL
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3 posted 2002-07-18 12:23 PM


I love this one, PDV and I'm glad that Wranx does too...
It reminds me of a Dr.Suess...
Great work.
~ cat in the hat hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-07-18 12:27 PM


LOL I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

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5 posted 2002-07-18 11:48 AM


Wranx is great, isn't she?  

Michelle

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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6 posted 2002-07-18 01:27 PM




YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, this is delightful, I can tell Wranx loves this as we all do! (big hugggsssssss) This is a beautiful dedication, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wranx, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-07-18 03:01 PM


Great write...
But, now I'm totally confused...
~hugs~

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8 posted 2002-07-18 06:59 PM


this is why it's good to reply to poets by their screen names until you can find out their gender. Hi, Tiersdin! Miss ya.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Poet deVine
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9 posted 2002-07-18 10:51 PM


Thank you all!!! I just thought I'd write something different using a member's name!
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