Open Poetry #21 |
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Adrift In Tranquil Times |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Heavy eyelids seeking shade Curled up in a peaceful glade And seek the sound of comfort calls And seek of solace, dreamtime falls Drifting off the night sky sounds Silent prayers in heartbeat pounds And seek the covers billowed high And seek of close contented sigh Hearing quiet in the wind Worries soothed to faint recind And seek the pleasant lullabye And sleep surround of soft shut eye Copyright Kkh 7/17/02 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Cool poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh Kathleen, I always love the peaceful and serene feel of your imagery in poetry, sweet friend, this indeed swept me off my feet and drifted me into daydreams of delight, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I think I'll keep this one on my nightstand, Kathleen... I always wake up in the middle of the night and can't fall asleep again... So, I'll read this poem and it will help me to drift off peacefully. Thanks for sharing this lullaby with us. ![]() Lyra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD This was lovely...really liked the way you did the last two lines in each stanza starting with and...so very peaceful, the feeling. |
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