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Mardi Gras Night
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Mardi Gras Night |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Mardi Gras Night we watch as stars parade in glistening float throwing their treasures to earth |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love the imagery. Very beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, SO...you collect beads, eh?  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, Mardi Gras is always a holiday I find to be colorful and amusing and always makes me want to get up and dance! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Breasts a'showin, Liquor flowing, Beads are throwin' Floats are going, Slicklady's poeming |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
IIIIEEEEE! Let the good times roll. paladin |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This...hmmm...what could I possibly say? I read this earlier and thought that this metaphor was graphic, and romantic, and accurate! It's one of those images y'have to KNOW--to know. I thought, "she's right. It's just like flashes of beads past the eye...comets, shooting stars..." You have to be QUICK to catch them! I love this. |
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