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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-17 08:54 PM


I can feel the breeze
And it feels great
It has not been around as of late

The breeze feels good
In the hot summer heat
I can feel it on my skin

Oh let the breeze keep up
So I can feel comfortable
And not feel the hot summer heat

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-07-17 09:01 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may that soft summer breeze always comfort your heart and make you feel happy and carefree this summer! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
2 posted 2002-07-22 06:21 PM


I can relate to this after my last camping trip. It was so
hot that I didn't even have the energy to make it to the
dock to take the jet ski out and try to cool off!
I believe it was 106, in the shade.
(for me that is about 29 degrees higher than average!)
And when the breeze came, it was an awesome thing!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2002-07-22 06:28 PM


I have heard from so many people how hot it is over there.  There is nothing like a cool breeze to bring new life to a weary body.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Hopeless Romantic
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4 posted 2002-07-22 06:53 PM


I really like this. I hope you always feel  the breeze.
vandana
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5 posted 2002-07-22 07:03 PM


enjoyed
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