Open Poetry #21 |
I Will Fight No More, Forever |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I Will Fight No More, Forever "I will fight no more forever" the wise Indian Chief had said wails from a mourning village they are weeping for their dead. Smoke rises from the ashes in dawn of early morn a nation broken hearted their spirits being torn. Somewhere in the distance war drums fill the air wreaking havoc through their land their hope had turned into despair. See the buffalo rising hear the white wolf cry listen to white mans thunder echoes in the evening sky. The spirits of yesterday walk listen closely to their tale the legends are not forgotten and their heritage will prevail. If you listen closely in the quiet of remember you can hear his words "I will fight no more forever....." repost for a friend Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-23-2002 09:07 PM).] |
||
© Copyright 2002 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved | |||
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssss) Oh Donna, being a huge part of the Cherokee Indian ancestry, this broke my heart reading this to imagine all the pain my family went through and being forced and banished from their land! (sad sigh) This is powerfully and sadly written, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-23-2002 08:49 PM).] |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have been delving into some history...you have captured their heart very, very well... I will fight no more, forever... |
||
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna...this is fantastic writing... Incredible...a for sure! ~Hugs Sweetie!~ |
||
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Noah, thanks. This quote came from Chief Joseph of the Nez Perce. I learned of him years ago in high school, read of him, and have remembered.... thanks again. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
||
thejingler Junior Member
since 2002-07-21
Posts 15NC |
The jingler was most interested in your lovely words about Chief Joseph, a subject very close to jingler's heart. Watch post for "The Return of Joseph". A piece I wrote with a most mystic story. jingler |
||
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah..one of my heroes. Well done! |
||
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The spirits of yesterday walk listen closely to their tale the legends are not forgotten and their heritage will prevail. Beautifully said, Donna ~ poetic hugs Lyra |
||
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I don't know your friend, but they sure have good taste when it comes to heritage. Ali?i ulsgeda yvwi anehv?i "Friendship is important in the lives of people" utlvquodi ase nasquv sdali?i "Your friend must be proud" Nice to see it come back around. Beautiful are the words you bring to us once spoken by a very remarkable man. agilvkwdi -"I like it" - is an understatement. |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
being part Indian, of course, this one got me. thanks for sharing |
||
Permiabilities Junior Member
since 2002-07-05
Posts 27 |
yes i must say i read this poem line by line and i repeated. this poem was really great. i loved every word. much applaud to you... |
||
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit, Beautiful poetry, beautiful photos. Well done... BC |
||
NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'...The spirits of yesterday walk listen closely to their tale the legends are not forgotten and their heritage will prevail...' These words are so important for all us, whether Native American or whatever our background. We must never let the legends and tales of our ancestors die with them. This was so beautifully written and the pictures added so much to it. Thank you, I truly enjoyed it. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
||
Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
You have touched something close to my heart. Thank you for rekindling my memory. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
||
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
We all have our causes and beliefs but the fight is needless and is never really resolved when the heart is broken. Wonderful expression Donna~ |
||
paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
We made hundreds of treaties with the native americans and kept none of them.How sad. paladin |
||
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Just a quick stop in this morning to say thank you to all. I hope the weekend finds more time for me to come back and answer all one on one. The days have been HECTIC to say the least. hugs to all. Donna Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
||
SnickerNicky9686 New Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 5Iowa, Scott Co. |
Great poem. Thank you for bringing out the best in Native american Spirit. Sad, but true in every stanza you write in this poem. Very well done. -Nikki |
||
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Donna~ you just have that way about you, this is just amazing....lovely you... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
||
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wonderful aunt donna, just wonderful, i luved this. its going in my library. awesum write! ~Ultimately, we are all dead~Proximo |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |