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chiming of the winds |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Tonight. tonight. I set the winds to chime. I beckon breeze my way. ~stifle my needy quest~ with emerald vision test, control the elements and reign upon her soul. Rain within my mind- a shivered turpentine, Caress my limbs of fury- with mythic shadow shine, Feed me. feed me. Feed me wisdom of years past. Ah, quenching fervor~ drown me in the blaze, I open mind to sensual feel the ancient ways… Now knowing of my limits I set to grace my psyche envelope peace within me… cleansing soul’s aspire I cling cling strong to nature’s storm and cease the chiming winds. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Tonight. tonight. I set the winds to chime. I beckon breeze my way. ~stifle my needy quest~ with emerald vision test, control the elements and reign upon her soul. Rain within my mind- a shivered turpentine, Caress my limbs of fury- with mythic shadow shine, Feed me. feed me. Feed me wisdom of years past. =========================== Oh man this is such a cool write girlie!! The imagery is poetry in motion as is your rhyme flow... and this thought.... "Rain within my mind- a shivered turpentine," how very cool is that!! and "winds to chime" brings to mind mystical, incantations and candle dancing  Youve cast a poetic spell on me  well done Devina-girlie jm How she loves me, I dont understand |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
devina I agree with JM, I can never top her. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
devina - this is just great - I loved all the images and feelings and the flow of your poem. Thanks for a great read!!! Paul |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
you do make me.. "feel the ancient ways" magick d BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
this flows perfectly of the tongue when read aloud, and your repeating words in some part/s just added to the peaceful quality of this timeless piece a true gem Brava Sammie ^i^ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Tanya, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, may the chimes in your dreams continue to twang with the percussion of enchantment always! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I set the winds to chime. I beckon breeze my way. ~stifle my needy quest~ with emerald vision test, Oh what a beautiful piece of writing, Devina. ~ hugs from a chipmunkLyra |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"I set the winds to chime." the whole poem was wonderful...but this line...was silk...helen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Fantastic, everything about this. Sandra |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I go away for a few days and you get even better!!! I love it! Where have YOU been? I miss ya T! Hugs 2 U, Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
devina - beautiful.... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Here I am..late *again*... Janet- you sweets...are like a tasty treat with your replies...I just love it....now post somethen?? miss readin you??? Sy- yep, know whatcha mean...we all have to try and beat her to the replies...she makes us look so *bad*... Paul- as always...love hearing from you man!!! brian- (silent bri as I've dubbed you) so I made you *feel* it huh? good. Sammie- glad to see you!! hope you're having much fun here at the site!!! Noah- awww sweetie...I'm making sure of that..thank you!!! Madame- givin back some of those hugs you have a ready supply of!!! ~hugs~ and my smiles for you!!! Helen- silk? naw...just some ramble..but thanks lady!! Sandra- glad you like girlie...good to hear from you!!! Kris- whhatcha mean? where have *I* been..posting right here!! bout time you found me again! hmpf...lecture later sweets...(evil grin) FINE...you get off the hook...now stop with the innocent smile stuff!!! hugs you!Bill & vandana- thanks to you..glad you enjoyed the read... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (07-28-2002 02:32 PM).] |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
stroking ego here... |
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