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Bound by Words (for Mikhail)
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Bound by Words (for Mikhail) |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now 
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I can never forget the way you held me so still. The threat of your words held conquest in my mind. Breath caught, waiting for your own breath to bring down my world. Feather-fast, drifting into my open eyes, the world is opened before me in the sound of your voice. Hold me closer, love, molding into you. Whisper in my ear, your ever-rising intensity. I am helpless for you and no other. I am selfless for you and no other. I put my desperation and tragedy on hold for you and no one else. I need you here now, love. I, who cannot need. written in blood before everything went black |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Excellent writing ... I can feel the intensity of the moment  |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I agree, NICE one, Anv. Very intense!!!! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Feather-fast, drifting into my open eyes, the world is opened before me in the sound of your voice. Hold me closer, love, molding into you. Beautifully romantic, Lori......and so very well written, indeed  ~ chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I too agree, intense..enjoyed it of course Kristen |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 baby....God ah love you... She said burn ... together. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Breath caught, waiting for your own breath to bring down my world. ====================== I put my desperation and tragedy on hold for you and no one else. I need you here now, love. I, who cannot need. ============================= damn this is so beautiful!! beautiful in its honesty...in its vulnerableness..in its confessions of self exploration and devotion. What I wouldnt give to have someone write for me like this again... you guys make me smile...love looks good on yas  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
awwwww so sweet and intense I so love this 1 tho If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
This is so lovely, I had tears froming, just thinking of the love bound within each word..... thank youLauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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