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This Moment, So Intimate
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This Moment, So Intimate |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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This Moment, So Intimate Hearts whisper in the dark loving tones soothe releasing more than what the body needs~ surpassing what the soul desires. Entwined in rythmic thoughts time of tender savored engraved on eternal walls of memories. Lovers heat burns lighting hearts of passion, touching more than just mere serendipitous pleasures each second spent in cherish~ this moment, so intimate when two hearts lie together cradled in the haven of our love.... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-17-2002 10:05 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna...perfectly beautiful.. so tender and full of love.. My how I enjoyed this romantic morning read. ~Hugs~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh it was gone for a sec but back now.. too pretty for you to take it away... Again, lovely thoughts here. [This message has been edited by Enchantress (07-17-2002 09:51 AM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yo Gentle one....this is borderline "Adult" if ya gotta mind like mine....superbly done... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nancy, just a morning gliche, thanks. Your so sweet, hugs to you! Well Toe,lets just hope that "softly sensual" will be permissable....but if it need be moved then that's just alright too! Thanks much. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms donna.. toerag is right.. but so is the poem it is tight right babe.. dug it |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautiful, sensual write but sooo classy. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
yes I agree - beautiful - sensual - intimate - evokes all kinds of wonderful thoughts and feelings - great write - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love your tender romantic reads, sweet friend, this one is another true gem, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Now you force me to find you out in open!!! Loved this btw... but? miss your shine in adult too...  pouting me....ok...and a grin... ~hugs lady!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Impressive... Rich and full... I enjoyed this poem a lot! Neeraja |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
D~ this is just so lovely....you are growing butterfly....it shows....  Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Like it a lot Charisma |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A beautiful poem, indeed. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"each second spent in cherish~" This is excellent, Donna. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Beautiful words and thoughts |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Gentle Spirit, this is so sensually lovely... mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Entwined in rythmic thoughts time of tender savored engraved on eternal walls of memories. Sensual and tender...the combination every woman dreams of. ~ dreamy hugsLyra |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
Beautiful and intimate. Touching. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
This is a lovely invite to see a part of hearts shared by two. Sensuality encompassed in love. Splendid piece. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hearts whisper in the dark loving tones soothe releasing more than what the body needs~ surpassing what the soul desires. Entwined in rythmic thoughts time of tender savored engraved on eternal walls of memories =================== Quick to realize the beauty of familiarity in this one. So true are your words and your verse spills these thoughts to us in smooth flow of calming assurance. The whole piece reads like shared whispers meant for only two and is beautiful in presentation as well as thought. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
DS, glad you dug the tight. Thanks. Kethry, thanks for the classy. Appreciate it much. Paul, so glad you could feel the words. Noah, thanks for loving romantic- sometimes I just have to write what I feel. Tanya, lol..I han out here alot, but when the mood hits.. hey thanks for getting rid of that pout and smiling. Hugs. neeraja, wow, thanks for the impressive! Luaren, you make my heart smile. Charisma, glad that you enjoyed. SC, thank you. Michael, dear friend, thank you for the kind comments. Paul, glad you enjoyed the thoughts. MC, thank you for the lovely. Lrya~ may every womans dreams come ture. He has indeed touched my life more than I can say. Rose, your thoughts are so appreciated. SE, thank you, the sharing is beautiful. Mark~ calm assurance~ THAT'S it exactly! Such a calming feeling it is...thank you. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
A second read and still no words can do this justice. Library [This message has been edited by texasrose (07-30-2002 09:06 PM).] |
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