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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2002-07-30 06:52 PM



Gentle Breeze

Calm across mountains of turmoil
Standing staring at the wavy horizon
Deep within tears causing pain
A gentle breeze allows a moment's reflection

Oceans accepting rivers from afar
Clouds changing into rain and thunder
Posing with eyes of wonder, listening for a dream
A gentle breeze opens a heart once again

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-07-30 06:55 PM


Absolutely Lovely!
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2 posted 2002-07-30 07:00 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Daniel, this is soooooo beautiuflly heartfelt, sweet friend, I too just love sitting out on my porch swing in the summer and feeling that gentle breeze, for when I'm sad even it always seems to make me feel relaxed and purifies me! (smiles) This is lovely and tranquil, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2002-07-30 07:44 PM


how I love the gentle breezes, especially if it's in a peaceful setting of solitude. Wonderful write, my friend!!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
4 posted 2002-07-30 09:05 PM


Very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

texasrose
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5 posted 2002-07-30 09:07 PM


Beautiful!
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