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The Ties That Die
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The Ties That Die |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
Our blood shared love precious and close goes beyond our daily cares. The greatest love a heart can boast makes humble peace well shared. A gentle word a gentle touch an ode to family ties. Just being there when one needs us dispells all graceless time. Outside the nest we search for love Oh how the heart gets hurt. The love lines where we find repair are ties that bind at work. Hence our hearts get sick with grief, we fight the fright inside. and in our souls we beg relief when we bid loved ones goodbye. My father had a daughter and everyone was suprised! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
so true... so true... regards, sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
You have so much wisdom, How'd you get to be so smart? Loved the poem and it's flow Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a very well written poem with so much to say and said so well. Thaks for your wisdom and great poetry - Paul |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
You've spoken of many thoughts rendering heartsongs wrought |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a sound, thoughtful write, *s M |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What they said kid! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
no place like home  nice write |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Rebecca, I understand this feeling ever so well, sweet friend, it is hard to let go of loved ones but I also know the ties never truly die for the bond spiritually and mutually never fades for the love only grows stronger and your loved ones will always remember you and guide you with their faith and light! (sigh) This is emotionally powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rebecca, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Very lovely, sweet words. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
written with the sadness of truth... An excellent write, Cherry  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
I'd like to thank everybody for the wonderful encouraging comments! |
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