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Duncan
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0 posted 2002-07-17 01:14 AM




Your eyes met mine
as we moved from embrace
my arms barely loosening

there was nothing else to do
but kiss you

and that’s where it all
gets euphorically blurry

again
I remember
your kiss

One blaze of glory - glory
find
glory
in a song that rings true
truth like a blazing fire
an eternal flame

Jonathan Larson  

© Copyright 2002 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
mycafe
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since 2002-05-23
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1 posted 2002-07-17 01:19 AM


I bet it was a good one for you to remember so vividly.

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

RosePetal
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2 posted 2002-07-17 01:30 AM


mmmm a kiss that takes away your breath and vision is wonderful. im happy 4 ya
Larry C
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3 posted 2002-07-17 01:32 AM


Duncan,
I love how you do that...the poetry I mean! Nice.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

MIdsummerRain
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since 2002-05-19
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4 posted 2002-07-17 02:01 AM


"...there was nothing else to do
but kiss you..."


Ahhhh...its amazing isnt it? The sheer joy of a moment such as this has to be ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
5 posted 2002-07-17 08:01 AM


This sounds strangely familiar...I seem to remember a kiss like this!! lol  
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-07-17 09:03 AM


Dang you're good!

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2002-07-17 10:12 AM


and that's where it all
gets euphorically blurry
============================

lip lock will do that to a person


Decaflame
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8 posted 2002-07-17 10:16 AM



You write blurry warmly...

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2002-07-17 10:16 AM


LOL.... the cat stepped on my keyboard while i was tying the above and it submitted ...
I guess Tabbie likes "distilled" replies the same way I like distilled poetry

Kisses, on the other hand...should not be distilled

laterliplockgator
motyme

How she loves me, I dont understand
If time wont change me, perhaps she can
And I feel her trying when were apart
God dont let me break her heart

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
10 posted 2002-07-17 05:38 PM


When is a kiss just a kiss?
Never.
Sandra

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lost in blue pages
11 posted 2002-07-17 05:42 PM


sounds kisses good....just love it

Charisma

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