Open Poetry #21 |
In Her Footsteps How I came to Passion’s challenge |
andEmmamakes3 Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 66Kent |
In Her Footsteps How I came to Passion’s challenge What called me to this friendly place? What made me stop And join this race? Well that is no mystery I came of course Because of Krissy I mean have you read her lately? Her syntax is off That’s not poetry She writes a lot of dreadful waffle It rambles on and on It is just offal Yes I mean it is a pig’s ear What does she think She’s doing here? Her writing simply baffles me Where are the Lines of poetry? So why am I here I think you know Why not I thought I’ll give it a go It’s really not that hard at all And Krissy Ahhh she’s a fool Don’t feel sorry for my older sips She had her chance To make it at PiP’s I know that she thinks she is it But her writing It is simply sh…. oddy I can’t write the rhyming word I know at my age It’s quite absurd But rhyming lines that truly flow Well I slipped up Don’t you know Emma please note this is simply us playing she’s my sister it’s allowed to disparage your sisters writing particularly when it is Krissy. Love you really sips, x x x Eternity, stands laughing at old time |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Yep, that competitive spirit runs all in the family, doesn't it? LOL! This is delightful, sweet friend, I know both your mom and Krissy will be delighted you shared this with us all and that you were inspired by them, sweet friend, this is beautiful, we're all so blessed to have a friend like you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Emma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
This is too cute Emma! Much as you teased your sister's writing, I am sure you know that Krissy pens her poems really well, and yours too! Thank you for sharing, it is so great to know you girls and your mum here! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so cute, Emma... I'm glad you are both here and your talented Mom also.... She is the one who brought me here. ~ big grinning hugs Lyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
We are glad you came. It is always nice to see new faces. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Emma, this is so unique and sh...ining. I love sisterly rivalry Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EmmaLove~ LOL ... I fall out with laughter over this ~ Some fun ! Some fun ! I would just imagine that the House of Searle rocks with *giggles* over just such as this~ LOL ... dang it ... wish you were coming to Florida too ... but, I'll send home a big HUG with Mom and Sis~ (That is ... if I let them come home !) *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Emma, anyone who can rhyme waffle and offal belongs here! You are Moderator material!! LOL! Listening to you complain about Krissy and your mum complaining about both of you is proof enough that you all make a wonderful family and one filled with love, behind the rivalry. Battle on, Emma....and keep writing!! |
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