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andEmmamakes3
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0 posted 2002-07-16 10:12 PM



In Her Footsteps
How I came to Passion’s challenge

What called me to this friendly place?
What made me stop
And join this race?
Well that is no mystery
I came of course
Because of Krissy

I mean have you read her lately?
Her syntax is off
That’s not poetry
She writes a lot of dreadful waffle
It rambles on and on
It is just offal

Yes I mean it is a pig’s ear
What does she think
She’s doing here?
Her writing simply baffles me
Where are the
Lines of poetry?

So why am I here I think you know
Why not I thought
I’ll give it a go
It’s really not that hard at all
And Krissy
Ahhh she’s a fool

Don’t feel sorry for my older sips
She had her chance
To make it at PiP’s
I know that she thinks she is it
But her writing
It is simply sh…. oddy

I can’t write the rhyming word
I know at my age
It’s quite absurd
But rhyming lines that truly flow
Well I slipped up
Don’t you know

Emma


please note this is simply us playing she’s my sister it’s allowed to disparage your sisters writing particularly when it is Krissy. Love you really sips, x x x

Eternity, stands laughing at old time
for ages? In the grand ancestral line
Of things eternal, mounting to divine

© Copyright 2002 Emma Louise Amanda Searle - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-16 10:16 PM




(giggles in delight) Yep, that competitive spirit runs all in the family, doesn't it? LOL! This is delightful, sweet friend, I know both your mom and Krissy will be delighted you shared this with us all and that you were inspired by them, sweet friend, this is beautiful, we're all so blessed to have a friend like you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Emma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

mycafe
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2 posted 2002-07-16 10:19 PM


This is too cute Emma! Much as you teased your sister's writing, I am sure you know that Krissy pens her poems really well, and yours too!  Thank you for sharing, it is so great to know you girls and your mum here!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-07-16 10:30 PM


This is so cute, Emma...
I'm glad you are both here and your talented Mom also....
She is the one who brought me here.
~ big grinning hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-07-16 10:43 PM


We are glad you came. It is always nice to see new faces.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kethry
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5 posted 2002-07-19 10:43 AM


Emma,
this is so unique and sh...ining. I love sisterly rivalry
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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6 posted 2002-07-19 06:32 PM


EmmaLove~
LOL ... I fall out with laughter over this ~
Some fun !  Some fun !
I would just imagine that the House of Searle rocks with *giggles* over just such as this~

LOL ... dang it ... wish you were coming to Florida too ...
but, I'll send home a big HUG with Mom and Sis~
(That is ... if I let them come home !)

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2002-07-19 09:37 PM


Emma, anyone who can rhyme waffle and offal belongs here! You are Moderator material!! LOL!

Listening to you complain about Krissy and your mum complaining about both of you is proof enough that you all make a wonderful family and one filled with love, behind the rivalry. Battle on, Emma....and keep writing!!

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