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Draw the Dark
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Draw the Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Draw the Dark  Curl into shadows Slip sweet into whispered sleep Good night my baby ~*~ Rest in reverie Dreams befit your countenance Shadows see your smile ~*~ Shadows into curls Sleep whispered in sweet slipping Baby mine, night’s good |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sun, very interesting style....well done.. like these little ditties.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Karilea, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, awwwwwww, this is so lovely, may the stars always twinkle with the whispers of love written upon them! (sigh) This is magical, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful dreamer slumber in thy mother's arms God protects from harm |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sigh! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Delicate and delightful, miss |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
How very tender you've done it, Karilea. mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This is indeed in the heart of every Mother I am sure, as I know it is in mine. Lovely. Nothing means more to me than faith, |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
With words like this the next generation will learn. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And all this time I've just been saying, 'goodnight'. Damn, I liked these! One blaze of glory - glory |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so very sweet, Karilea... its a real mommypoem! and a beautiful lullaby.  ~ nighty nite hugsLyra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yes a lovely poem ... M |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
HI! COOS! great Sunshine thank you BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
tlc all wrapped up in this lovely poem. Enjoyed! Deb |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Calm settles withn these beauties. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How lovely your words Sandra |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
such a lovely poem - sigh - I liked it lots - Paul |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely!!! Cor |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Soft and sparkling - like starlight Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
ahhhh... like a blanket of lace dropped over a baby.. sweet and delicate all. This is just lovely, Sunshine A nice poem for us aunties too! I'm already itching for some great-nieces or nephews.. I miss babies in the family. But I have a long wait (I'd better have - the oldest niece is only 15 LOL) |
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