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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-19 03:38 PM


My room is such a mess
I have enough stuff to have a yard sale
Then I would have less

I walk in my room
And look at it with disgust
I feel the gloom loom
I wish I could keep it clean

The problem is
I need a bigger room
Because mine is too small
Or I need to stop collecting stuff
If anybody goes in my room
They would trip and fall

My room is a mess
I hate this

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2002-07-19 03:42 PM


Bummer.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2002-07-19 03:52 PM


then go clean it up...lol...helen
Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386
Ohio, USA
3 posted 2002-07-19 04:18 PM


it is
not right
that rooms
can't clean themselves
I wish you well in your room adventure - Paul

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2002-07-19 09:23 PM




(giggles in delight) Uh oh, now you better clean that up or you'll get no dessert! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This is soooo wonderfully amusing, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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