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Eagles Laughter |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
touch my hand inside of your heart nothing will be erased, hope you find what you're after as for me, I simply believe. look at the sun when its over the failing winds gone away, hope you get what is for you as for me, I go away. the land of a thousand yesterdays deserts me, laughing, I look to the heavens for comfort and all hear is the rain. walk one more step to the edge to look over my life, a fractured relic of my soul remains but I live just to fly. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
powerful words evoking powerful images and feelings - thanks for a very good read - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh Michael, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, always flap your hearts wings like the eagle and believe you can fly, sweet friend, this is graceful, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
touch my hand inside of your heart nothing will be erased, hope you find what you're after as for me, I simply believe. look at the sun when its over the failing winds gone away, hope you get what is for you as for me, I go away. ============================ a fractured relic of my soul remains but I live just to fly. ============================= trust me gifted poet of the wind... you did just fly................... touch my hand inside of your heart nothing will be erased, and of that exquisite line... I just want to sigh.  How she loves me, I dont understand |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful. Happy thoughts I am thinking. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
I can feel so much passion in this precious write of yours, Michael. Simply wonderful! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Michael this is SO beautiful! Wonderful work....Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Awesome, a great write! Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wonderful write. Beautiful way to share your heart Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-17-2002 06:58 AM).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Hope your heart will soon fly with as much freedom as your pen gives. Well written! Hugs, Deb |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You can fly to me anytime! Love, Me It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Funny in a world this big that so many can share the same feelings.......Beautiful write MG. As Always Jenn E |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Rising above! Happy Flight! Loved your write, Shenachie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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