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| Open Poetry #21 |
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Jagged Edge |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Jagged Edge You penetrate with jagged edge of soul shard- And I am hungry for the cut… Your lengthy words cradle demise- soon the death of me… Singe of heartstrings (a valiant attempt) I still sway- ~motionless~ to your sultry stage… Dancing as an imp of want-fevered passion- I burn down resistance in walls of defeat… just to touch you is to touch me… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Very nice, thank you for sharing such a wonderful peice of poetry, I really enjoyed reading it.  "Pretend inferiority and encourage his arrogance." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Tanya, I understand this passion so very well, sweet friens, sometimes I can feel so lovesick and be touched and it can really sting sometimes and it can be aching though I know in the end I will achieve stillness of heart! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Love it Tanya...... I burn down resistance in walls of defeat… Love the lines, you said it all hon! Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Egads! woman. shhsh. There may be children about. ~wranx I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on. E.F.Rose |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
just wonderful lines that evoke oh such powerful emotion - makes me tingle - thanks devina - Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very sultry and sensual.. Enjoyed. ~Hugs~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The urgent is there... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ You do the poetess sooooooo well~ 'just to touch you is to touch me…' Oooooh YEAH ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
I like this one with coffee...or even better with sleeping in...where are you when I need you? |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Marshalzu- so glad you enjoyed the journey of my mind today!!! Noah- this passion? I'm drowning in it!!! and? I love it!!! Thank you for your understanding... Gentle Spirit- as always sweetie- I thank you for the read...as my mind is always somewhat? jagged??  wranx- this was as innocent as I am sweets...never fret!!! *EG Paul- tingle eh?? oh I make me sooo proud sometimes!! lol glad you liked sweets!! Enchantress- thanks for the sultry dear lady... sunshine- and you know that is exactly what I tried to portray? you are right on it woman!! Marge- I have MISSED you somethen feirce!!! Glad you popped in to witness the newest on me!!! love ya lady!! Rob- I'm right there... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (07-16-2002 11:56 PM).] |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
Passion in DISPLAY here!!! I love it... hugs to you two!!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms d you are iniquity in gauze parchment with a slight mist that clings the fabric (in this piece that is) |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
you know I love this poignant side of you sis!!! miss you!!!! A heart can only truly break, once it learns to love completley. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Damn, now that's great poetry! I've read you many times before, and this is by far your most powerful. It's a keeper~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dancing as an imp of want-fevered passion- I burn down resistance in walls of defeat… just to touch you is to touch me… this is so near perfection..loved it all as it touched me *s M |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ok. . . how did I miss this one??  wow. . . no one does need like you. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The water boils in a cauldron heated by a roaring fire of passion's flames.... You write this toooooooo well.... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Beautifully despairing and lovely. Why is tragedy always so romantical? "Oh you've got green eyes. Oh you've got blue eyes. Oh you've got grey eyes." -New Order |
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