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My Eyes Tell Me
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My Eyes Tell Me |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“THROUGH MY EYES” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Wanted to write a poem, of love and romance… But my heart didn’t, it was locked in a trance… So I searched afar, until I found someone… Wanted to write about her, if she had no objection… Was caught by her charm, loving, and serene… A most beautiful woman, sensuous, yet pristine… Know she’ll be warm, my eyes tell me so… I’d like to talk one day, wonder if she will also… ~~~~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I think you can count on it  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
well you won't know unless you ask her...ask her...(courage) nudge nudge |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
echo, shall I, slicklady Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
With a sweet invitation like this ... I think she will also, Bill. Nicely penned. Best wishes, /Kit |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I agree with all the others. She will also. Just noticed you changed your pic. Very nice. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-06-2002 10:49 AM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Bill, I think she will. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Now that you've found her, Bill...don't let her get away... You absolutely must send her this beautiful, romantic write.... I like your new pic...  ~ lots of chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Amazing what we can see when we look isn't it? I hope so too! Very nicely done Bill. *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, I know she will be happy to take your invitation! (big huggssssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light awlays shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
-------------------------- Wanted to write a poem, of love and romance… But my heart didn’t, it was locked in a trance -------------------------- So many times I have felt like that. That poem just was too good! **Please Check out some of my poetry, Thank You** |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Very interesting things may happen, when you ask. Do it, Bill. (And then tell us about it, of course.) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I say ask her..........I can't wait to read the wonderful poem you share afterwards. Very nice to read you again and of course your thoughts convey what alot of us go through in those moments of hesitation. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
well...we are waiting...................................................................................... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
H'mmmmmmmm.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just let the heart lead BC. . .and take your time. . . great work my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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