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A Duet with Elan . . . Sensual fingers . . .
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A Duet with Elan . . . Sensual fingers . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
sensual fingers tipped with electricity our frequency spikes our lips meld as we embrace fingers forgotten for now ~*~ passionate moment having tipped the scales of love momentum building where are the laws of nature being rewritten for now ~*~ our bodies aglow resting after ardent gift hearts beating slowly while recalling our ardor basking in rememberance ~*~ sensual fingers tipped with electricity our frequency spikes frequent electricity sensual fingers sparking Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper & Elan~ Certainly sent *sparks* across my screen~ Lovely blend of poetic pens~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
What a lovely poem, Interloper. Sounds like you're in love. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Elan & Interloper!! What a duo you two make! Softly sensual...wonderful. Encore!! ~Hugs to you both~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Incredibly electric! Beautiful! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I feel the emotion. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Deliciously done, very romantic and sensual writing. Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enjoyed looking in on this more you two!!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
There's nothing 'static' about this poem! It's lovely....good teamwork!  |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Touch...should be this way..excellent write to you both! So enjoyable indeed. Sincerely, Reg |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent write... You both duet very well.. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob and Elan you delightful pair and what a duet you’ve sung this is utterly utterly wonderful. This is a very special piece from you both such incredible writing full of such visual images. Touch should be as special as this, electricity should spark and flow, and you’ve both captured the essence in this evocative and sensual piece of sigh  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I was very impressed with the first poem of Elan's I read....I've always been impressed with yours, 'loper..natural that the two of you should collaborate so well. More, please...  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well there you go, Interloper, finding someone to match you, word for word... Well done! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Marge ~ You can just call me "Sparky" from now on SmartChick ~ Ya think? Nancy Lee ~ big grins of appreciation here EarthenSoul ~ My first time to see you comment on my/our work. Thank you. loner ~ Thanx. Sandra ~ R U surprised by that DS ~ Interloper bows and Elan curtsies to this fine compliment. Regina ~ Uh-huh. Yessum. You betcha! Magnus ~ Many thanks. Munificent Marsha ~ You evoke huge smiles from me (and heavy heartbeats )'Deer Michael ~ I also was impressed. Why do you think I chose to ride on her coat-tails? I've already gotten more replies on this one than on my last five solo attempts combined Vandana ~ Thank you. Sunshine ~ No, I believe I am totally over matched. I just try real hard to keep up {pant} {pant} Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hey you Two~ this was a fantastic duet, very loving, sensual, and full of passion..... duet it again...  Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Interloper, tanka for the opportunity you provided to perform a duet... and thank you to all of the readers who enjoyed this just as much as we did! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ouch! I just got zapped by your sizzling, electrical write. Well done Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lauren ~ Thank you for the kind comments. Id love to do it again ... Elan ~ You're the GR8est! Keth ~ Heh, heh, heh. GOTCHA! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I too really enjoyed this and am looking forward to future duets. Dawn |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Wow! This duet definitely has the gifted touch of poetic pen. Kudos to the both of you! Shenachie |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friends, you two make such a wonderful team together, this is a fabulous duet! (big hugggsssssssss) Such pure passion fill your words, sweet friends, I LOVE IT, we all love you both so much! You have such a beautiful hearts, sweet Interloper and Elan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
wondering where our Interloper is. Miss your work, Sir. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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