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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-17 05:57 PM

Slow Southern Kiss

it was a slow southern kiss
the kind with a drawl
he didn’t hurry through it
liked to make it crawl
embraced my whole body
linked to his lips
breath at a stand still
time in total eclipse
I could hear my heart
it was beating in my ears
felt like he burned me
maybe more like he seers
then my knees buckled
they went totally weak
he has the touch
and knows technique

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-06-17 05:59 PM

Speechless!!! I don't know what to say.

Cold hands means a warm heart

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

2 posted 2002-06-17 10:41 PM

Mmmmmmm what a great

poem about a kiss! I love it! Thanks for the wonderful read

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2002-06-17 10:51 PM

you just invited me back to wonderful memorable kisses I have had - your words make my lips tingle - thanks Paul

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-06-17 10:52 PM

Gawd Helen!!
What's his name..where does he live????
What a kiss!!
Man....love this one!
~Hugs~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-06-18 04:26 PM

I do believe that I know this. . .

wonderful helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-06-18 06:11 PM

Sounds like a good one...James

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

7 posted 2002-06-18 11:39 PM

Okies, Lady..steamin' up the place with that public kissing stuff! LOL! OMG!!

umm..did I mention how I LOVED this?

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

my3monkeytoes
Member

since 2002-05-11

Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze

8 posted 2002-06-18 11:40 PM

mmm mmm good! Nothing like it in the south!

~Sydney McLean

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2002-06-20 12:24 PM

Oh, yes! LOL I like this very much. *S*

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

10 posted 2002-07-07 04:55 AM

I could go for another round of this.
Loved it again

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

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