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Burning Hands
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Burning Hands |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX 
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Flames of fire The Aries rage and anger moves beneath my feet Falling around me Everything moving so quickly Burning the flames of chaos It takes my soul into a place of hatred, greed and corruption Must run Run away from from everything Slept with you Weep for you Hated you Made you I was everything for you Everyone for you I loved you All you gave back was nothing You scare me You are me I hate you Hate you for bringing fear, temptation, and fustration in my life Or maybe I love you more for that... Love, Ladycat Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I felt the emotion. I really like this piece. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is interesting but a little confusing...I can't think of a situation where I would want nothing back unless that were my intentions or expectations from the beginning...otherwise it would surely be disappointing and frustrating and so forth...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good stuff, lady. So sad to be unfulfilled, and confused. Sandra |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Such heavy feelings here...I think this is great! I think I understand these feelings way too much! Hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow, what an outpouring of emotion and feelings...like the tornado, swirling, dipping, rising.... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Can relate. This needs to be read.  I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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