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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-07-16 04:38 PM

Gimme Some Lovin'

But I don't
like to beg.
It leads me
to insecurities
and causes me
to question
the sincerity
of those I
care for.

I would
much rather
just walk away
then to feel
like I must beg
to be the object
of one's love.

JamesLee
July16
2002

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-16 04:48 PM

Love is defiently needed. Good write!

Cold hands means a warm heart

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2002-07-16 05:07 PM

beautiful expressed, like it a lot

(((hugs)))
Charisma

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

3 posted 2002-07-16 05:15 PM

, I liked your poem....I like most all of your work....good thoughts put into poetry....

[This message has been edited by Toerag (07-16-2002 05:58 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-07-16 06:31 PM

(smiles) Oh James, I understand what you feel here, sweet friend, as much as we desire something so much, sometimes we must know that we can't always meet each others expectations so one must always just go with the flow and the love will always be balanced! (sigh) This is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-07-16 07:16 PM

Very well said James...
Enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2002-07-16 07:42 PM

James this was so good! But then, everything you write is so good.

Hon, never, ever beg for love. If someone doesn't love you freely - just keep walking. Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2002-07-16 08:10 PM

this is a very good poem - I liked it lots - thanks Paul

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-07-17 11:55 PM

Thank you theloner23, Charisma, toerag, Noah, Enchantress, Marti and Paul for the nice response.
Yeah if your beggin' you probably are not with the right one...
My computer broke down so I'm in the process of getting it fixed...James

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