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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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0 posted 2002-07-16 10:59 AM




Breakthrough

Beforehand, in opine
that my elation
was sluiced fire found
in the barrel roll
of crystal tumbling

the swallow of vintner’s love
allowed me to raise the glass
and through it,

I saw you.

From that moment on,
taking you straight
was all the fire

I would ever need.




Photo courtesy: PiP



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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2002-07-16 11:07 AM


ms deca...

you got out that dang fishin hook huh?

cool stuff babe...dug the words and the juice view

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386
Ohio, USA
2 posted 2002-07-16 11:40 AM


great poetry here - enjoyed the read - thanks - Paul
Music Maker
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since 2002-07-07
Posts 152
THE ORIGINAL !!!!
3 posted 2002-07-16 11:42 AM


I think it was Ambrosia that you imbibed, not common ol' Red wine.
Lovely!!!!
Kind thoughts
John

Grass won't grow under feet that don't move.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-07-16 02:00 PM


Dang Deca!  You sure to sizzle a sultry tune girl!
Love this ...sure do...
~Hugs~

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
5 posted 2002-07-16 02:11 PM


the swallow of vintner’s love
allowed me to raise the glass
and through it,

I saw you.

There must have been an aphrodisiac in that glass, Deca....

I love the poem and the inuendos.
~ hugs and grins

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-07-16 07:10 PM




(smiles) Oooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the wonderful words of passion you weave, we all love you so much, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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