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south of chicanery (lady luck)
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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sacrosanct mother of a jezzie's satiation pander my craving with your inviolable sin secure my insecurity oh my fairest of feral consummate our vows of consanguine kin distend for my glower with your salient jut that inclement emotion in episodic eclipse appendaged on tendril ribbons of fragile thin as armored chrysalis immersed in lucid mist elate my succulent excessive of deceptions with opaque miracles expunged from my rip violate my entrailing moans with quick silver seep that births me with the poison of heartsore grip know that my primordial poundings of soul were but obsidian in black trousers of night rising on my side of a fresh spent widows wealth as velvet in look back looking back for lots wife at some sodom salted solid, south of chicanery ©Dark |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Walking the fine line sacrosanct circumspect... |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Hmmm... let me guess where you're staying... *g* You make even the underbelly sound good, DS. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms deca... dang casinos anyway..lol thanks for the read dear lady ms indigo you are so bad..(wink) so bad!!! just palm springs babe...not at the mustang ranch this time thanks babe |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi DS I've been to Palm Springs many times..but it never looked like this. Perhaps I hung out at the wrong pool? Enjoyed this word treat! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I like that quick silver seep! You take some nice shots you know! Looks mighty good on ya stranger~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie the casino spa downtown...is like a mine vegas....now the aqua calente is open too and it is pretty cool.....but lady luck is still a crook.thanks for the read babe ms bluezy..thanks hon for your eye touch, some fine candy you leave with your re's [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-16-2002 05:53 PM).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This sounds like you need a change of scenery..really bad. Want some of my mountain mist? Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina.. mmm yes ms think I am ready for some but would need a poetess guide also... (I can get lost in my own thoughts) thanks hon |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Wow, ooohhhhhh...I love the wonderful dazzling atmosphere of this, sweet friend, go over the border and there you are sure to find much more scenery you can handle! (smiles) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sacrosanct mother of a jezzie's satiation pander my craving with your inviolable sin secure my insecurity oh my fairest of feral consummate our vows of consanguine kin distend for my glower with your salient jut that inclement emotion in episodic eclipse appendaged on tendril ribbons of fragile thin as armored chrysalis immersed in lucid mist =============================== I am tingling with vocabulary vibrations and in alliteration afterglow.. now all I need is me dictionary and a smoke  LOLOutstanding verbiage and imagery here DS I bet your head hurt so good after this one very very cool write poet sir... you just do this so consistantly well..and Im just so glad you do. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah..thanks my friend for that read and comment janet..yes got hurty knoggin from it.....thanks lil friend for the sweet reads...really appreicate you lots |
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