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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Cinderella Drunk Tonight I am eternal "Heavens gift" almost supernal with verbosity and diction far above most mortal men With malignant boring glory I insist on telling stories which you have heard a thousand times at least since you were ten. So if I must, or if you may discourse on what I have to say Cinderella's slippers lost just after 3 AM With mornings celebration I won't feel the same elation Tequila dreams don't linger past the barroom's closing call |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
bags, I think this is very different for Cinderella, I particularly like the last bit although perhaps you should stop waiting for the tequila sunrise. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
myself? I always like the drama of looking for that other damned shoe...but then? THAT'S JUST ME.  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A surprise twist on the Cindarella we are used to Bags... I liked it  ~ fairytale hugsLyra |
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