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A Touch of Life
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A Touch of Life |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Isn't poetry just maddening, both heart tugged and gladdening? Isn't it the waxing of grace? The way to make redeeming face Don't the words just pull you in to the soul that lives within? Don't the thoughts so draw you out, to the world and round about? Isn't rhyme the loveliest, making swirls from music blest? Aren't the words just wonderful leaning to life's tug and pull? Isn't art all of of these things? A touch of life on angel's wings. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (07-16-2002 08:58 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
That is a beautiful poem that is well expressed Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A smiler to see me out of here... BTTT with you, m'dear...  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Isn't rhyme the loveliest, making swirls from music blest? Aren't the words just wonderful leaning to life's tug and pull? What a wonderful feel to this one, Keth... this is just exactly the way I feel about poetry.  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Isn't poetry just maddening, both heart tugged and gladdening? Isn't it the wax of grace? The way to make redeeming face It certainly is all that!!!  Wonderfully done Kethry~ |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
YES! to all your questions raised. That's why I am glad that I found this lovely place of words. mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
YES! LOL I love it! Deb |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
...'Isn't art all of of these things? A touch of life on angel's wings...' I'd have to definitely say yes to all your questions. This was really wonderful. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my soul and keeper of my heart’s song this is simply exquisite, I love it when your words are wrapped in such soft and delicate wings of wonder. Mmmmm this is just too delicious for words. And again you fly my mind into fairyland where dreams are sprinkled with starlight and moonlight is reflected back inside dreamer’s song. How beautiful the flow and the ease of this delight and as always darling heart your words shine like no other. Do I love this? YES YES YES I love it utterly utterly utterly. Beautifully written and perfectly presented. As I said this is exquisite As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Music Maker Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 152THE ORIGINAL !!!! |
How well expressed. Lovely thoughts and so well put. Congratulations!! Kind thoughts, John XX Grass won't grow under feet that don't move. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah Kethry how beautiful expressed, always good to read you. Charisma |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yes it is...all of the above....'cept my garbage....Yassee all my crap is off the wall....(bathroom walls mainly)...and it shows...don't ya think?.....I'm gonna quit probably and just keep reading other's work....but it was fun....like this Kethry... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Toe, some words of encouragement, your words have grace and sometimes poise you use them as if they are toys you make us laugh and that's a gift heal torn hearts when there's a rift you show your wisdom hid by wit and make us think and smile a bit you take the words turn them around and leave us rolling on the ground don't underestimate the bathroom wall it's needed here by one and all just remember if you go I have your tribute I will show. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Don't the words just pull you in to the soul that lives within? Don't the thoughts so draw you out, to the world and round about? Yes... they sure do! *S* I thought your poem was wonderful when I first read it this morning... but your response to Toe is even better, Keth... or certainly dearer to my heart. *S* Hugs and thanks... maybe he'll listen to you? *S* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Great ending, and insightful poem. Well done. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
We could all join unions 'cuz writing dont' cause bunions Some poems smell like onions While others are just honey 'uns You've a great sense for the "honey 'uns". You are always a pleasure to read. Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It's all of those...and more *s hugss M |
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