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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-15 08:54 AM



Then


when no answers come
and her day reaches end
the myst will settle
gone the pretend

a sigh she will breathe
his time will be done
when this day reaches end
and her night has begun.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
1 posted 2002-07-15 09:18 AM


The knock echoed through the room
Shakes spider webs on the wall,
Twilight fades as she’s leaving
Sigh of loss from sweet lips fall.

Gloom

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-07-15 02:52 PM


Very good write. Enjoyed!

Cold hands means a warm heart

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-07-15 08:04 PM


PG ..
if he would someday come knocking,
there would be no spider webs, (am dusting tonight)
nor fading lights, nor doors that lock
the candles will flicker,( vanilla scented)
his shadow will appear
and then..the sparks shall fly...
they could you know..
thank you for your poetry

I do love it when you verse me
M

the_loner_23..thank you for  reading and responding
~smiling~
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-15-2002 08:06 PM).]

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