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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-15 08:31 AM


Shield of Flowers

Rising each morning
to the light leaking
through the slatted shades,
I watch the flecks of energy
dance before my eyes
and wonder...

If I sent you an anonymous message
would you know it was from me?
Would its perfumed scent
give me away?
Would the tear stained smudges of caring,
blend my thoughts
until they become yours?
Would the reflection of my love
display itself to you,
behind my shield of flowers?

Would your eyes wear me,
my words dressed just for you,
unfolding in a language written for two?
Would you feel the kiss placed gently,
that sealed my thoughts warmed by time
and the glow of the moon?

If I release to you
my fading thoughts, untouched,
could you see they were meant for you...
each word a flower, a gift to you
until I am shielded no more?

M


© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
1 posted 2002-07-15 08:40 AM


You place beauty of words
On the page in flowering thoughts

An enjoyable read.

Gloom

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-07-15 02:53 PM


This is what I rate awesome work

Cold hands means a warm heart

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
3 posted 2002-07-15 03:17 PM


Lovely expression of heartfelt words.

Deb

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4 posted 2002-07-15 03:18 PM



Maureen, thank you for
this little missive...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
5 posted 2002-07-15 07:47 PM


PG...do you think you could?
You know how I enjoy your responses, they add the warmth you try to hide inside. I thank you for taking the time to do so, it means alot to me

M


the_loner_23...thank you so much, I think  you have been following me, and I am beginning to  look  forward to your visits. hugss
M

Deb, I try to write my feelings, usually hoping they are the  loving ones..*s
thank you
M


Lady In White,
thank you for visiting, I appreciate your kind words
hugss
M


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