Open Poetry #21 |
Sir Knight |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Sir Knight, I bestow before thee My naivite I shall even Purge my heart of uncertainity As you gently caress My brow With your gentle kindess And sweet honey dew kisses I kneel before thee With my love Imprisioned within My aching soul I beg of you Sweep me off my aching feet To far of places Of to your castle In the mists And forever I shall Be devoted And forever spellbound As you cradle me within your loving arms... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may that loving knight sweep you off your feet and may you hop aboard his horse and take you off into true loves world forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
wow strong images, especially the aching feet. Enjoyed. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Seems like a great plan, if you can find the right man to do it Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is lovely... very gentle, very pleasant.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ceinwyn, A delight to read, enjoyed. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
What a sweet, romantic poem Kristen. Much enjoyed. Sincerely, Titus PS: Of seems to be misspelled. Off, perhaps? As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Milady woulds be a boon to give solance to your acheing feet with a massage. paladin |
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