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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2002-07-13 08:42 PM


Sir Knight,
I bestow before thee
My naivite
I shall even
Purge my heart of uncertainity
As you gently caress
My brow
With your gentle kindess
And sweet honey dew kisses
I kneel before thee
With my love
Imprisioned within
My aching soul
I beg of you
Sweep me off my aching feet
To far of places
Of to your castle
In the mists
And forever I shall
Be devoted
And forever spellbound
As you cradle me within your loving arms...


© Copyright 2002 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-13 08:46 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may that loving knight sweep you off your feet and may you hop aboard his horse and take you off into true loves world forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-07-13 08:57 PM


wow strong images, especially the aching feet.
Enjoyed.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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3 posted 2002-07-14 09:35 AM


Seems like a great plan, if you can find the right man to do it
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-07-14 10:10 AM



This is lovely...
very gentle, very pleasant....

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5 posted 2002-07-14 10:18 AM


Ceinwyn,
A delight to read, enjoyed.

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6 posted 2002-07-14 08:11 PM


What a sweet, romantic poem Kristen. Much enjoyed.

Sincerely,
Titus

PS: Of seems to be misspelled. Off, perhaps?

As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together.

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7 posted 2002-07-15 08:26 PM


Milady woulds be a boon to give solance to your acheing feet with a massage.

paladin

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