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Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2002-07-11 06:20 PM

Fimblewinter

Ragnarok blows cold.
Icebergs calve in southern seas.
Frost giants laugh long.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-07-11 06:28 PM

Nan darling heart, oh how perfect this is darling heart, and IWIHWT, not that I ever could because I cannot do brevity, or if I do its never elegant. Wonderful darling girl utterly utterly wonderful

Oh how well you compress your thoughts, I love it, exquisite writing absolutely exquisite

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-07-11 06:45 PM

Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2002-07-11 06:53 PM

very well done!!! Paul

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-07-11 07:21 PM

(smiles) Oh Nancy, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love the powerful views of nature you weave, this is splendid! (sigh) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-07-11 07:37 PM

An interesting combination of words, Nan
Somehow, they all seem to fit together so well that they make a very nice piece.

~ big hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

6 posted 2002-07-11 08:22 PM

How well you transformed
the majesty of haiku into this
delightful piece of work!

Brava!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

7 posted 2002-07-11 11:38 PM

Marsha, Hah! You can do brevity, you forget that I saw you prove it once. You just don't want to. 'fess up, girl.

loner 23-thank you so much.

Paul-that's so very kind of you.

Noah-I count on your sweet remarks.

Lyra-

Elan-what a nice answer-in haiku form!

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

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