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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2002-07-11 12:05 PM

Smooth and creamy,
sweet,
it fills my mouth--
leaves echoes in my brain.
I never want to swallow.
Chocolate
Pudding
and Cool Whip.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

1 posted 2002-07-11 12:12 PM

You shouldn't swallow..I'm sure of it, most women I know never do...and besides...all those calories...

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2002-07-11 12:14 PM

now here is a great insight to the tensions of life - fun and well written poetry - thanks Paul

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-07-11 12:25 PM

This sounds yummy, Nan....I think I'll have some for lunch.
You have made me very hungry for chocolate.

~ chocolaty hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2002-07-11 01:15 PM

Toe, it's a female thing, the not swallowing I mean.

Paul, Thanks-I smiled as I wrote it.

Lyra, I like to spread the craving around, maybe that way there's less of it for me. Or misery loves company. Or something.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-07-11 06:24 PM

Nan darling heart, save some for me, and I’ll join you in your chocolate pudding. That’s one thing you’re guaranteed in Florida, chocolate will be on the menu. I don’t believe its legal to leave it off a menu is it?

I love this poem sooooooo simple but ohhhhh so descriptive. Wonderful writing darling heart simply wonderful. I love it utterly, but then if it mentions chocolate I’m guaranteed to love it.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-07-11 06:45 PM

Where's the pudding? Great write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-07-11 07:29 PM

(smiles) Oh Nancy, I love this, sweet friend, I too got a craving for chocolate reading this! (sigh) This is a delicious treat of a poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-07-11 07:32 PM

Mmmmmm......GOOD STUFF!!

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

9 posted 2002-07-11 08:35 PM

LOL... ok this is too cute!

Deb

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

10 posted 2002-07-11 10:59 PM

Damn, and I even looked at the pudding today when I was at the store! Ya had to write this, didn't ya?

How many redheads will it take to get one little puppy to class?

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

11 posted 2002-07-11 11:32 PM

Marsha, I should hope chocolate is on the menu! Heavens, a weekend without chocolate would be unthinkable.

loner 23- Thanks! I've been enjoying the funny ones you write, too.

Noah, I try to spread it around.

Enchantress--how kind of you!

Deb-well, maybe cute enough.

Duncan, you passed pudding up, so you deserve to be without it now.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

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