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With Every Touch
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With Every Touch |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
With Every Touch Every smile you give me warms my soul and melts away some pain Everytime you hold my hand playing with my fingers you chase away some fear With every tender touch to my face a gentle brush of your hand some hurt is brushed away Each time you kiss my lips sweet like the sweetest honey you show me the pure taste of "Good" in this life And everytime I'm in your arms home and safe at last you heal me with such caring love Tai |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All good attributes...a nice penning... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully written Tai. You are a very fortunate person to have this touch in your life... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very beautifully written. I like it a lot. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
Sunshine, Magnus & Loner... Thank you all for reading and responding =) It means a lot. And of course, as is usual of you three, you are far too kind  Thank you! |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Excellent write my dear! You have such a way with words!  I'm really enjoying reading your stuff.Hugs Cindi |
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