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Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 2002-06-12 11:36 AM

Rainbows are ribbons
Of light fantastic
Tied to the rain
Before and after
Bows in the morning
Before
Bows in the evening
After

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-06-12 11:39 AM

Don'tcha just love rainbows and their promise?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

2 posted 2002-06-12 12:07 PM

That is a beautiful and creative take on the subject of rainbows! Bravo!

Love,
Bonnie

"I want to Live! Life is a banquet and most poor bastards are starving to death!" -Auntie Mame

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-06-12 12:22 PM

I love rainbows, Mr.Toe...but have never found that proverbial pot of gold...
Great poem!

~ rainbow hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

4 posted 2002-06-12 12:40 PM

Toe hi there, this is an absolute gem. You have such an amazing talent, and it really does illumine the page, truly wonderful. This has such a delicate feel about it, I must admit that I’m a sucker for rainbows. Really good writing and thank you for this beauty

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-06-12 12:52 PM

Toe,
Ain't that the truth.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (06-12-2002 12:55 PM).]

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2002-06-12 02:16 PM

What a treat this is to read. *S* It's lovely, dear friend... a refreshing respite in this too busy day. *S*

EarthenSoul
Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 163
WA, USA

7 posted 2002-06-12 02:27 PM

A delightful piece of poetic candy!
Much enjoyed.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2002-06-12 06:13 PM

Toe,
you paint a picture that showcases your talent. I knew you had more depth that you have shown!
Well done sir, I could see the rainbow bowing.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

9 posted 2002-06-12 08:34 PM

Toerag writing of rainbows....this could be an end to civilization as we know it!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2002-06-12 09:23 PM

I feel all wrapped up
in warped color...
kind of like waiting
for the other shoe to drop...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2002-06-12 09:35 PM

Toe

What a great idea ...the way you wrapped up the rainbow...loved it!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2002-06-12 09:42 PM

Hey Toe,
Take my hand and we'll dance upon a rainbow!!
Loved this write!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

13 posted 2002-06-12 11:45 PM

Why, Toe, I do believe you are betraying to us that you are a poet! Feel naked?

core

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2002-06-13 09:40 AM

OhToe~
This one is pure *gold*~
Just beautiful thoughts~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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