Open Poetry #21 |
Lake Of Unshed Tears |
Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I feel like drowning in a lake of unshed tears My lungs… almost exploding fighting for air My eyes… still dry… desperately searching for the shore Because it must be there somewhere |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
very good read. That is some serious stuff. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
i'd say climb into my boat, but i've been stuck in it on the middle of this lake for years.... what a great theme. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Neeraja, this sound sso very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope this is not a current feeling you have and now you weep tears of joy and love! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sad, and i can relate to the sad ones...thanks for sharing |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Sometimes you just have to wonder if there is a shore at all. Well done. Nan |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Yes, it is most definitely, there...somewhere... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...James |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
It is so wonderful to read all those sweet comments on my poem!!! Thanks!!! Neeraja |
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