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Backyard Sea (Haiku) |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
White foam crests green wave. Blossoming umbrella tree awash in sharp breeze. Nan |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
 Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Another raindrop and the stream will overflow into the meadow... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks for the thumbsup, loner!  Nan |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Enchantress, what an enchanting haiku. Thank you. Nan |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I love this Haiku!!! Neeraja |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Nan darling heart in this delight you have excelled your usual high standard normally your writing shines, in this one poem you have written incandescence. I cannot praise this too highly. This is exquisite writing I love it utterly utterly. Truly beautiful, I can’t do brevity, or I can but its simply not successful, this however is utterly utterly perfect. Excellent writing I love it utterly utterly love it As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
As the rains falling Talk about weeping willows Mimosas swaying  (smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is a beautiful haiku, sweet friend, I believe I have seen visions like this before and they are always so amazing and miraculous! (kiss on cheek) Beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Neeraja, Thank you so much, for reading and for letting me know you liked it. Marsha, but do you like it? Noah, What a pretty haiku you wrote in response! I love the way haikus get more haikus, don't you? Nan |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah, dear friend, makes me long for the view from your back porch. I hope the move and the summer is finding you content and happy Loved the haiku by the way! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nan, it's a beautiful haiku but I'm suddenly reminded I have to put my washing on the line. *HuGS* Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love haikus and this is perfect. A sea of green, this is clever. *s* Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
Foam, Umbrella, Awash... You write this type poem so well and thoughtfully! ~SM |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Hootowl, Thanks. Glad you liked the haiku. Lynn, I would never remind anyone of laundry, dear. You must be mistaken!  Gentle Spirit-Thanks! My3monkeytoes-how kind of you. Nan |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
lovely write, well done. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thank you, Tracie. Nan |
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