Open Poetry #21 |
Without Words |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Without Words I welcome the cool of morn as it fans itself over my body, chilling the heat from dreams that drenched me awake. You came to me, without words, lips telling secrets touching off a new rhythm to my heartdance, leaving me breathless and out of step. For you are my weakness, and bleed me blue when I condemn myself to only you, cradled in whispers of mine to share a sleepless night. I sense your every thought, the desires of the moment in untitled feel. When I am with you, I have found my place, no more false starts. And in the frame of time, you are my morning comfort allowing me to surrender to a journey, a pictured togetherness, powered by a knowing, without words. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Beautiful... without words! Neeraja |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yep..I know this feeling and I also didn't get any rest last night. I was awake until 8am or so I think. *sigh* loved this, Lady. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
NNIIIIIIIICE!!!! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So beautiful. Good dreams, hm? Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A very nice write and I enjoyed the read. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Absolutely beautiful Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Maureen This was so very beautiful. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice Maureen... ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Much can be said without words... A beautifully written poem, Maureen. I hope you are doing well... ~ hugs without words Lyra |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad I came back here in the last pages...I knew I'd find a good one from you there. bumpity bump |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Sometimes, words can't begin to express the true meaning of what the heart bleeds...very well done GF~ ((hugs)) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Neeraja..thank you for your words and reading me. *s Temptress ...it's nice to see you here..glad you enjoyed this and the feelings..well it would be nice to sleep a whole night through for once. hugs M Krishankins...hm thannnnnnnnkkssss Sandra...sometimes the dreams are wonderful and you never wish for them to end. But real would be so much better. *s Seymour...thank you for your support, always, M JP..thank you for your response, I appreciate it. |
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