Open Poetry #21 |
Sleepless |
Rhiannonuu New Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 5Colorado, USA |
My love, I can't sleep for the beat of my heart has been tangled with yours and although we're apart.... you are what I desire and my longing won't rest til you lay by my side I've been sure from the start... that we are the same two leaves from one tree two souls for our destiny's joining prepared My eyes are wide open My heart standing ready to welcome you in without doubt...without fear My love, I can't sleep for the want of your touch But the darkness descends and I find that I must |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
just beautiful...and welcome to passions...you will love it here...helen |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, such sweet romance and heartfelt emotion fills your words, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous debut in Open, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Robin, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, I noticed you are from Colorado, I am too, YAY, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome!!!!!!! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Rhiannonuu New Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 5Colorado, USA |
thanks all....I'm happy to be writing again |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...is this like Sleepless in Seattle...James |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Rhiannonuu...Very beautiful expression of love to your soulmate. EXCELLENT POEM!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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