Open Poetry #21 |
A Secret Place |
Stryder Junior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 29Silent Hill |
A Secret Place There is a secret place where I go Where a luminous light encircles me Free from the fear and the pain Everything is pseudo; reaching out to me My suppressed mind Inaugurates me through time To rejoin my past once again And remember myself back then I enter an précis state of mind Ultimately leaving the world behind Forget about reality; forget about time Watch my entire life unwind A place to rewind; a place to reflect Watch my life playback, and intersect My conscience escapes me As I watch my past come into affect There is a secret place where I go To forget about the pressures of life Shut the doors on time... And open up my mind -Stryder |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Stryder, you may open your mind here, any time...I don't recall welcoming you before, so Welcome to Passions.... you're going to like it here! Karilea |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Stryder, first of all, WELCOME to Passions!! It's good to have you here. Now, I like your post a lot!! Keep em' comin! Krishankins A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Oh Stryder, I am so happy to read your wonderful words again, sweet friend, I remember your fabulous debut in Spiritual and I know as long as you always follow your heart you will always hold much joy in your secret place of introspection! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stryder, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Stryder...Excellent poem!!!! Great expression and deep thoughts. ***Ivy Rose |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome to passions...put your feet up...relax...unwind...you're among friends...you will like it here...great post...helen |
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