Open Poetry #21 |
Origami (senryu) |
paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Folding paper squares Swans and flowers with her hands Mommy makes magic paladin [This message has been edited by paladin (07-07-2002 12:24 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a child coos delights mother's hand brings her magic childhood is transformed |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
A senryu in answer to my senryu.Thats cool Sunshine.Glad you liked it. paladin |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Nice observation!..i can't do origami though..my hands stubbornly refuse to listen to my commands.. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Can ya make a frog? Cool write. New sig in construction. Please maintain speed limit. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I love origami and you fold such grace with your fingertips here! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cool write Bob. I'm married to a wizard who does origami.. Love this! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I've seen some beautiful ones...swans are popular...James |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I've never tried origami...but the poem is excellent, Paladin. ~ paper hugs Lyra |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Paladin...Very lovely images in this origami (senryu) poem. Enjoyed very much ***Ivy Rose |
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