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The Reader.... |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
The Reader Her slow voice husks edging his soul will he hold out for her control for he would have her finger thin her view of his every whim he doesn’t breathe before the ring distends exhale sweet life she brings what does she say? it’s not so much, it’s just the way her voice husks touch “read me lady, my poetry, bring to it, please, reality.” [This message has been edited by Decaflame (07-05-2002 03:04 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Deca....I always enjoy how your poetry leaves a yearn within the reader....Feeling as though they have been sensually touched and waiting for more.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
he doesn’t breath before the ring distends exhale sweet life she brings what does she say? it’s not so much, it’s just the way her voice husks touch “read me lady, my poetry, bring to it, please, reality.” ========================================== Now Deca...you just KNOW how I feel about this one right? Thought so! Excellent! Glad I caught this one before heading out the door. Later.... ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this sounded to me also like one last breath of joy sprouting from romantic lovers! (sigh) This is so lovely, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
intriguing... and Lovely! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
'tis very beautiful but do you mean breathe in this line? he doesn’t breath that would make it perfect in every way.. *s M |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the right words, in the vocal cords of the right reader. . . can make the world disappear. . . wonderful my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Wow! You give the depth of feeling a whole new meaning. Enjoyed! Shenachie |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is wonderful. Sandra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Deca, This such a soft lyrical piece, it made my heart yearn . Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Something about this made me read it in a whisper...lovely poem! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca A voice from the throat of love...is loved. Such a lovely feeling expressed here so well! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Thank you all for being the reader for a few moments, and hopefully for taking something from this to wing away on new threads of thought... |
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