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Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 2002-07-15 07:52 AM

It was a beautiful sunset,
Against a mountain view,
Beauty uncomparable,
Romantically shared by two.

It wasn't their first encounter,
They'd loved so much before,
Each time better than the other,
Who could ask for more?

Their bodies lovingly entertwined,
Now "one" in love together,
As the sunset went down in color,
Love consumated forever.

Their commitments sealed in romance,
Their love is never ending,
A honeymoon in Paris,
A new life together beginning.

It's such a touching love song,
One that should endure,
Nothing would come between them,
Goodluck LongJohn and Balladeer.

[This message has been edited by Toerag (07-15-2002 07:54 AM).]

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2002-07-15 08:49 AM

ROFLMAO... One of these days, Long John is gonna learn that there is no safety net in waiting until you leave to post his taunts... he may disappear, but his ink remains and... unworthy as it may be... must be answered! LOL

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-07-15 08:54 AM

ROTFLMBO...I knew, I knew! that before I got
to the end of the second line, there was a punch waiting...some ONE day, I'm going to find a seriously lovely poem from your pen...but I'll bet that's a LONG way down the road...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-07-15 10:04 AM

Toe,
Almost had a wet dream, until the water hit me in the face. LOL enjoyed

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-07-15 06:26 PM

Now there's an old fashioned love story if ever I heard one.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-07-15 06:27 PM

LOL

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

6 posted 2002-07-15 06:29 PM

Maybe old-fashioned, but it sure is good... and totally true.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-07-15 06:30 PM

(giggles in delight) LOL! Here we go, another celebrity romance, let's hope this one can make an exception and last for more than a few weeks! Hehehe! (big hugggssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, I knew that punch was coming too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-07-15 07:32 PM

I just knew there had to be a punchline, Mr.Toe. And I knew it had to have something to do with Longjohn and Balladeer...
But the rest was good also.

~ winky hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2002-07-15 08:03 PM

OhToe~
Ya' hoodwinked me !
You rascal you ... as I was reading, I was forming my 'Oh My, how romantic' reply~
Then ya' slam-dunked me with that punch line~
ROTFLMLCFO ~

AND ... SEYMOUR !!!!

LOL-ing at the fun in this one~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

10 posted 2002-07-16 01:18 AM

Shucks, Toe. You're gonna put the tabloids outa business.

Shenachie

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2002-07-16 05:18 AM

Wonder what happened in Paris? james

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

12 posted 2002-07-16 10:21 AM

You had me. I thought you had actually written a touching love poem. And then you hit me with it! Ha!

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

Music Maker
Member

since 2002-07-07

Posts 152
THE ORIGINAL !!!!

13 posted 2002-07-16 11:19 AM

OMG - I too was duped!!! Got all Slushy there for a moment, why not do the honest thing - version 1 for the duel, and version 2 for the romantics with a nice ending, and redeem yourself in true style!!!!
Nice one,
Kind regards,
John

Grass won't grow under feet that don't move.

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

14 posted 2002-07-16 11:34 AM

very funny Mr Toe - I too was taken in for a while but with your poetry one always looks for the other shoe to drop - great poem - Paul

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

15 posted 2002-07-16 11:39 AM

Deb

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