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Draw The Circle Ever-Wide
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Draw The Circle Ever-Wide |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Draw The Circle Ever-Wide ~*Marge Tindal*~  Stomp the rhythm of the night Draw the circle ever-wide Chant of cant in ancient calling Invite of spirit to abide~ Lay the rune in stone's surround Make ye' not a silent sound Voice of legend comes to be enters receptor port of me~ Gather tongues in vision's spread Rake-of-soul from mountainous refrain Let my ears be filled with wisdom over and over again~ Grant me gift of feathering quill So that I may pen at will All the promises yet to be poured within vessel of me~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
A nice, almost Native American, air. I like this. Nan |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You rang?  Have rattle--will travel! You KNEW I was gonna jump all over this one! You caught the spirit voice whispering in the rhythm here, mom! Love this...oh yeah, it's been awhile, I'm READY!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful Marge....this almost chants at you as you read it.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH Gawd Marge! I love this! ...and I'm keeping it! ~Hugs~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This has such an air of mystery about it. Like secrets from the Pyramids or an incantation from a Maya temple. Really striking! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marge, wonderful~~ Lovely.. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful, Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ Well, I definitely wasn't sure where this one came from ... all I can attest to is that I rounded the corner ... it stopped me in my tracks~ I 'think' it's the new muse, Blesaka, that has been skirting around looking for a place to lay his/her thoughts ... Hmmmmmm ? Pilgrimage~ Thank you so much ... Actually it felt a little 'Nordic or Mystic' to me ... not real sure yet where it's wanting to take me~ Serenity~ LOL ... heard that rattle~ It definitely came in a cadence ... Couldn't help but think of those dudes that stomp around and make music with trash cans and things like that ! I am soooooo bad on names ....  That's how LOUD it came~ Thankee, gal~ Magnus~ Thank you so much~ Enchantress~ You just delight me with your enthusiasm~ *Hugs* with thanks~ BettyLou~ You sure read it right .. it's still a 'mystery' to me too~ Thank you VERY MUCH~ GentleSpirit~ Thank you sweet lady~ SuzieQ~ You know I appreciate you ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very beautiful, Marge... maybe it came from a past life about which you know nothing but this poem..... at any rate...it is spectacular. ~ superhugsLyra |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Marge, this is a SUPERB write!! I can't add anymore to those who have posted replies already, except that for some reason I felt pride while I was reading it. Just because you shared. Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart, you have no conception of the difficulties I've had to surmount to leave a reply on this, it is a nightmare, however you are worth the supreme effort. This is such a magnificent penning of your spirit, always you write well, and so often you write brilliantly, never more so than when your spirit walks with the spirits of your heritage. Wonderful writing darling heart utterly utterly wonderful As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's very appropriate that each verse begins with a command... for the rhythm in this makes one sit up and take notice! *S* Excellent work, gal! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
beautiful poetry - well written - such vivid images - loved it - Paul |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge "Grant me gift of feathering quill So that I may pen at will All the promises yet to be poured within vessel of me~" So many times you are blessed to be able to do this... Such a beautiful, spirit-filled poem! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is the poetry subject that draws into the circle, you, K and I... still I feel the connect of us...be it in the heat or wind Margie girl...this has touched me...*complete* today... I love this!!! Love you too... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Shame on me for not having gotten back to those of you who left such captivating replies ... me apologize~ Lyra~ I only felt the presence of Blesaka surrounding me ... maybe so~ Thanks gal~ Kris~ Thank you so much ... I like the thought of that 'pride' thing~ MarshaLove~ You know ... I can't help but think that the 'green ribbons' are somehow attached to this piece .... You think that's possible ?? Thanks hon~ SweetSuthernGal~ That YOU would take notice is enough for me~  Thank you~ GoodKnight~ Thank you very much~ MartieSis~ Well ... blessed or 'cursed' ...  Sometimes I wonder ..... but I am GREATLY appreciative of the *gifts*~ Devina~ *touched me complete* ... I LOVE that ! Thank you sweet lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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