Will want to make me whole.....

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #21

Will want to make me whole.....

ambermize
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 157
California

0 posted 2002-06-15 10:24 PM

An aching in my stomach,
Everytime we speak,
I dont know what to feel,
As your touch leaves me weak.

I know I shouldn't want this,
I can see it in your eyes,
I glance deep inside me,
To find a reason to try.

Why should I give myself,
To someone's soul agian,
Why cant I forget this,
And make you my friend?

Where do these tears hide,
Waiting for you somehow,
I thought I fought this to the end,
But I'm left wondering now.

I want to be near you,
And know that your mine,
But I will not tell you,
No matter what I must hide.

I can not feel you,
Inside me agian,
And break away silently,
Wondering when......
You will want to make me whole

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

1 posted 2002-06-15 10:46 PM

Gosh what meaning - what does make us whole and if it is someone will they. thanks for the powerful words!!!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-06-15 11:43 PM

An aching in my stomach,
Everytime we speak,
I dont know what to feel,
As your touch leaves me weak.

This sounds like the feel of falling in love.
Very good write, Amber

~ hopeful hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

3 posted 2002-07-25 12:09 PM

must have missed this one sis...

MISS you too!!!

Tanny

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.