For the Wind captured the dreams

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Open Poetry #21

For the Wind captured the dreams

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-07-05 05:00 AM

The wind wisped around me,
Causing a slight chill
leaving me
in thoughts of you.

Its crispness washed over my soul
And filled my heart with inspiration.

For the wind captured the dreams
From within my heart
And offered to carry them to you
Across the distant miles
For you to inhale and embrace.

As the wind reached its destination You too felt a
slight chill
Through the crispness of
a gentle breeze

As you breathed the air
My thoughts flooded through you
And for just a moment
Time stood still
as you were warmed
by my passing thoughts.

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

texasrose
Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 146

1 posted 2002-07-05 06:05 AM

very, very nice.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-07-05 08:45 AM

Darn wind!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-07-05 09:29 AM

Fee~

'And for just a moment
Time stood still
as you were warmed
by my passing thoughts.'

My ... this is just stunning~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-07-05 10:12 AM

Fee
You never know what the wind will do. Enjoyed

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

5 posted 2002-07-05 10:55 AM

...leaving me
in thoughts of you...

I like that!

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2002-07-06 03:22 AM

quite lovely
**sigh**

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

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