Open Poetry #21 |
Colored fields |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
blooming potato field In colored fields I'll rest my mind Close will it be to earth And when I pick it up again It's gained some of her worth For earth is mother of all life She's painted all mankind So when you see a colored field Just lay to rest your mind Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Time and time again I have seen colored fields and often layed my mind to rest there. This is a simple thought expressed wonderfully Krishankins your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
What a soothing and serene poem!And a lovely picture too! Hope to see more of your poems! Keep writin Neha |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
This I like very much Titia, simple beautiful!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a lovely poem, Titia. And, the picture is just perfect. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Titia, this is lovely and it makes me envious. My brother in law would love a coloured field like that it is planting season here and there in not enough rain. Beautiful poem Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks to all, yes, colored fields are beautiful, lots of them here at the moment. Keth, hope there will be rain for your brother in law's field, but I know that's a problem overthere sometimes. Sweet Charisma, so terribly glad to see you again. Missed you dearly lady, you have no idea how much. Hope you'll share again that beautiful poetry of yours. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This poem is so relaxing, Titia.... and I love the idea of Mother Nature painting the colors... I can just see her, with her artists brush and palette... ~ hugs of nature Lyra |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Titia. *S* My Dad's colored fields are unfortunately overun with snakes this year... Can you guess how fast a coward (me *G*) can gather produce? LOL |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Titia, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love meadows and whenever I visit my grandparents in Missouri I love to rest in the daffodil fields to ease my mind! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-24-2002 06:43 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes the beauty of nature has a way to rest the mind and soothe the soul...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful image, wonderful write, and I never knew potatoes bloomed Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh how very much I loved this poem. And I believe your line ...'For earth is mother of all life..' with all my heart and soul. My husband and son went to Ground Zero in New York City and I insisted they bend down and touch the earth. It is the only way we can know the soul of life. The picture is so peaceful and calming. Great, great job. Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Dear Every were I look I see differend colored fields Love Mamma |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Titia- I really must hang around and read your poetry more often. This is beautiful, as is the photo. Thanks for sharing both. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Titia, you've penned a splendid poem PoetFriend... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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