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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Sunflower Sherbet By: Noah Eaton 7/4/02 Fireflies jingle as lanterns in the sunflower pastures Turning on the lights in romantic feng-shui Burning sweet potpourri incense marinades Drowning your lips into mine, burying you in this sunflower sherbet The sky is a navel orange ripening To the glaucoma of a tambourines beat Playing as I sweep you off your feet Drowning my lps into yours, making love to you in this sunflower sherbet There’s a tire swing dangling from the honeysuckle trees We push each other, screaming happily like the children we used to be Crying staring into your eyes, seeing that girl within your womanly beauty Rocking on the see-saw as if our growing up was just a myth to you and me And as the sun falls, I’ll hold you dearly Walking in meadows of gold rendered in the watercolors of hydrangeas Rocking softly in Memphis bluegrass, rolling to natures orchestras Carrying you, kissing your tanned neck through lovers lucky ravine Fireflies jingle as lanterns in the sunflower pastures Turning on the lights in romantic feng-shui Humming sultry summer fireworks like every day is New Years Day Drowning your lips into mine, burying you in this sunflower sherbet Burying my heart in your angel eyes... (For my love Joanna, another one of my cute lovesick muses! )"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-04-2002 09:32 PM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
And as the sun falls, I’ll hold you dearly Walking in meadows of gold rendered in the watercolors of hydrangeas Rocking softly in Memphis bluegrass, rolling to natures orchestras Carrying you, kissing your tanned neck through lovers lucky ravine Fireflies jingle as lanterns in the sunflower pastures Turning on the lights in romantic feng-shui Humming sultry summer fireworks like every day is New Years Day Drowning your lips into mine, burying you in this sunflower sherbet Burying my heart in your angel eyes... What a romantic you are my friend and you describe it so well. I just love the images above!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful romantic images as always Noah! Wonderful write! ~Happy Forth Hugs~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah Wonderful love filled imagery! You are a talented writer, my friend. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I had to read this, just the title was refreshing. I love the romantic feel and the images you use. Nan |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
love this!  SS [This message has been edited by Singing Sparrow (07-08-2002 01:38 AM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
When are you going to meet with Joanna, Noah? I think she will absolutely love this poem. Its so romantic... ~ hugs from the heartLyra |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
This feels so very soft Noah! wonderfully done!!!! Krishankins A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
muuuwahhhhhhh......tender as you sweet Noah~ Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ever cute muses...Joanna shall love sherbet! ThisDiamond |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
you always write so beautifully noah!!! this is so romantic and perfect, I cant help but loveeeeee it sooo much. I thank you for this gift of poetry |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Noah- This is filled with such beautiful imagery! I couldn't read it without smiling. Wonderfully done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
you've packed so much summertime vibe into this one, noah!! the fireflies and fire works, the tire swing, the open fields... and of course the summer romance. i love the images you paint. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown [This message has been edited by MidnightSon (07-09-2002 04:47 AM).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Noah~ love your love sick muses, well done on this romantic and loving write. ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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