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Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2002-07-04 08:07 AM

Between Midnight & Dawn

Between Midnight & dawn,
a world is torn down.
Echoes of laughter,
no longer will sound.

A shimmer of tears,
appear in the eyes.
A heart filled with promise,
now quietly dies.

Memories that flooded
the mind and the soul.
No longer bring comfort,
they relinquish their hold.

Empty arms, not reaching,
as they use to do.
The body relaxes as
the desire fades too.

The bare facts of life,
have taken control,
Realization sets in,
A world slowly folds.

Between midnight & dawn,
is an eternity of time.
A new dawn arises,
All hope left behind.

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-07-04 08:13 AM

A very sad write, Kitty...
very effectively leaving behind
a vast emptiness...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-07-04 08:42 AM

Kitty,
Your own quote,
If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!
Good write.

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

3 posted 2002-07-04 09:19 PM

This so sad but very beautifully written. Thanks for sharing Kitty!

*hugs*

~mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-07-04 09:30 PM

Kitty~
Written with such poignancy of feeling ...

'A shimmer of tears,
appear in the eyes.
A heart filled with promise,
now quietly dies.'

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2002-07-04 09:48 PM

Sad but beautiful write....Very good writing!

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

6 posted 2002-07-10 12:37 PM

So sad... but well written! Lot of emotions behind the words...

Neeraja

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

7 posted 2002-07-10 02:39 PM

life begins at 3am, they say.

this was like watching life on mute...seeing the pictures of the city at 3am but in silence...waiting for a new day and another chance.

i enjoyed this a whole lot!

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

8 posted 2002-07-10 02:50 PM

Thank all of you so much for taking the time to read this and for your very nice and encouraging comments.
I am always quite pleased to have someone
say they enjoyed something I've written!
Again, Thank all of you.

Kitty

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