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Open Poetry #21

deepness

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-07-09 04:23 PM

deep blooming sky beneath
shining stars so summoned from a cry
locked deeply in solitude of time
estimation quite exact
in tact the smile brushes lightly
the understood nature forever
silence the past with tomorrow
time beneath the cries
solitude of silence
brings tranquility
summon someone else
someone to trul understand
deep summons from a cry beaneath time
understand to the silence with tranquility

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-09 04:28 PM

Your poems are so deep. yet I like them. they are cool.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-07-09 09:44 PM

Kellie,
Good writing. Miss you! Hope all is well and it is nice to see you still showing up here. Love ya', Larry C

Show you care to those you love...today.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-07-09 09:51 PM

solitude of silence
brings tranquility

beautiful.....sometimes I like nothing better than to hear nothing but....
the sounds of silence....
Well done Kellie!

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-07-10 03:45 AM

silence is good. nice poem Kellie

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

5 posted 2002-07-10 02:52 PM

Kellie--

I especially like the line..."silence the past with tomorrow"...that is a gem of wisdom.

Shenachie

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

6 posted 2002-07-10 02:54 PM

Bridget- Thanks. the truth of light lies in the darkness of fates own garden. oh oh oh guess what a poem idea....

[This message has been edited by Kellie_Cantrell (07-10-2002 03:01 PM).]

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