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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-07-04 12:31 PM

I could try to pen a love song
But such talent I don't possess
With my heart and soul I love you
And of this love I now confess

I could try to paint a picture
But would not know quite where to start
For no canvas would be big enough
To paint these feelings in my heart

So I'll resort to written words
To express how I really feel
Your love means everything to me
My heart is always yours to steal

Whenever I find myself with you
I feel as 'tho I'm walking on air
You give me newfound confidence
My life's complete when you are there

My words speak much about me
And I hope you like what you see
For the images now emerging
Reveal the heart and soul of me

Suetang

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2002-07-04 12:34 PM

I like that staggered flow. I suppose it goes well with how you feel, perhaps. It's a shame how little justice words do for affairs of the heart.. i hope you find your peace, but im sure you already have

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-07-04 11:40 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, and your lovely words always sing out like a love song and create beautiful works of art, sweet friend, I just know your love will always be blessed by your golden heart and that's all that matters! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2002-07-05 01:09 AM

*sigh*
Can I send this to someone? Sometimes to say it the most simple way is best, and this is a classic way of doing it. I love it.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2002-07-05 06:55 AM

I love the way you write such honest and open love poems Sue...

"My words speak much about me
And I hope you like what you see
For the images now emerging
Reveal the heart and soul of me"

Very nice!

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

5 posted 2002-07-05 08:02 AM

"I could try to paint a picture
But would not know quite where to start
For no canvas would be big enough
To paint these feelings in my heart"

I really loves these lines.. a wonderfully happy poem.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-07-05 10:55 AM

enjoy

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