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Open Poetry #21

(to kelly) you are here

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2002-07-02 10:17 PM

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This poem can be found at...

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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-07-03 12:33 PM

HI--

your poem is very tender and sweet, it holds a powerful emotion....and because you encourage critique can I say warmly, the spelling was hard to get through.....maybe check that for next posting.....

Emeralds from mountains
thrust towards the sky
Never revealing their depth

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2002-07-03 12:46 PM

What you're going through comes through alright but if you can improve on some of spelling it would have a positive impact on appreciating a couple of words difficult to decipher

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2002-07-03 02:26 AM

damn!

you said it!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2002-07-03 03:42 AM

Good!

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